The Application of Catford’s Shifts on the Persian Translation of Oliver Twist by Yusof Gharib
Current study aims at finding the realization of J.C Catford‚Äôs category shifts (structure shift, unit shift, class shift, intra-system shift) in the Persian Translation of Oliver twist. The Ideal goal of this study however is to find the areas in which Persian is deviated from English and to pave the way for future studies which are to formulate manners for translating from Persian into English plus distinguishing obligatory shifts from optional shifts via the application.
Catford‚Äôs Shifts, scrutinizing, category shifts, application, optional shifts, obligatory shifts.
Among many of the translation studies some whose focuses were on the text alone concentrated on the formal changes rather than meaning e.g. catford‚Äôs shifts, transpositions by Vinay and Darbelnet, etc. Translation as an interlingual practice necessitates moving from the form of the SL to the TL. In other words translation is a change of form (Larson 1984: 2 ) and this formal change takes place at different levels within a text.
studies done in this area had named the phenomenon differently e.g. skewing (Larson 1984), Transposition ( Vinay and Darbelnet1995, 2000 ), shifts ( JC Catford 1965 ). From which some were prescriptive and practice- oriented, trying to formulate these shifts from one language to another. However, from the mentioned studies and terms used to refer to formal changes, Catford‚Äôs shifts are focused more than others in this study since they provide us with a more organized and systematic classification of such changes.
Vinay and Darbelnet (1995) introduce the term ‚Äútransposition‚ÄĚ as one of the four procedures of oblique translation and define it as the following:
Although, Vinay and Darbelnet did not use the term ‚Äúshift‚ÄĚ in their definition of the formal changes, they referred to the same phenomenon in translation as is referred by Catford (1965) who is known as the pioneering theorist of ‚Äúshifts‚ÄĚ. Shifts are defined by J.C Catford as ‚Äėthe departures from formal correspondence in the process of going from the SL to the TL‚Äô and are classified as the level shifts and category shifts. This study However had focused on the category shifts which are defined as the followings.
¬†The most detailed attempt to produce and apply a model of shift analysis has been carried out by Kitty van Leuven-Zwart (1989, 1990) of Amesterdam whose model takes some of the categories proposed by Vinay and Durbelnet and Levy and applies them to the descriptive analysis of translation, attempting both to systematize comparisons and to build in a discourse framework above the sentence level (Mundy 2001: 63)
Six paragraphs were selected randomly from the whole novel (fifty chapters). And the shifts were applied on them by means of tabulations and arrows. Finally a conclusion is made on the shifting areas in translating from English into Persian. The realization of structure shifts are demonstrated in terms of S (subject), O (object), V (verb) and p (predicate). The focus of intra-system shift is on the realizations through the occurrences of possessive forms in both languages.
In this section all samples are analyzed and observed for instances of the realization of category shifts.
Sample 1): For a long time after it was ushered into this world of sorrow and trouble, by the parish surgeon, it remained a matter of considerable doubt whether the child would survive to bear any name at all; in which case it is somewhat more than probable that these memoirs would never have appeared; or, if they had, that being comprised within a couple of pages, they would have possessed the inestimable merit of being the most concise and faithful specimen of bi- ography, extant in the literature of any age or country.
پس از اینکه نوزاد به کمک جراح محل به این دنیای رنج و اندوه آمد تا مدت ها بعد همگی تردید داشتند که بچه زنده بماند و لزومی داشته باشد که برایش نامی بر گزینند. و در آنصورت محققاً این یاد داشت ها نیز هرگز به نظر کسی نمیرسد و اگر هم قرار می شد. آن را تدوین کنند در یکی دو صفحه می توانست به صورت شرح حال موجز و دقیقی در ادبیات هر عصر و کشوری خود نمایی کند. ¬†
Sample 2): What was Oliver‚Äôs horror and alarm as he stood a few paces off, looking on with his eyelids as wide open as they would possibly go, to see the Dodger plunge his hand into the old gentleman‚Äôs pocket, and draw from thence a hand- kerchief! To see him hand the same to Charley Bates; and finally to behold them, both running away round the corner at full speed!
ناقلا دست خود را در جیب پیر مرد فرو برد و از آن دستمالی بیرون کشید، به دست چارلی داد و آنگاه هر دو با نهایت سرعت به گوشه ای گریختند.
Sample 3): He turned over the leaves. Carelessly at first; but, lighting on a passage which attracted his attention, he soon became intent upon the volume. It was a history of the lives and trials of great criminals; and the pages were soiled and thumbed with use. Here, he read of dreadful crimes that made the blood run cold;
کتاب را ورق زد، ابتدا به آن توجهی نداشت ولی ناگهان چشمش به عباراتی افتاد که نظر او را به سختی جلب کرد. این کتاب، تاریخ زندگی و محکومیت جانیان بزرگ بود، صفحات آن بر اثر ورق زدن زیاد و دست به دست گشتن کثیف و سائیده شده بود. در آن کتاب ماجرای جنایاتی را خواند که خون را در عروق منجمد می ساخت.
Sample 4): The momentous interview was no sooner concluded, and Oliver composed to rest again, than the doctor, after wiping his eyes, and condemning them for being weak all at once, betook himself downstairs to open upon Mr. Giles.
تازه این ملاقات به پایان رسیده¬† و الیور از نو به خواب رفته بود که دکتر پس از پاک کردن چشمان خود و بر طرف ساختن ناراحتی عارضه، پائین آمد تا بی درنگ بر آقای جیل حمله ور شود. و همین که در سالن ها هیچ کس را ندید فکر کرد می تواند فوراً عملیات را به نحو موثری در آشپزخانه آغاز نماید. به همین علت به سوی آشپز خانه راه افتاد.
Sample 5): You will,‚Äô said Rose, after a pause, ‚Äėtake some money from me, which may enable you to live without dishonesty‚ÄĒat all events until we meet again?‚Äô ‚ÄėNot a penny,‚Äô replied the girl, waving her hand.
رز پس از اندکی سکوت گفت: (( پس اقلاٌ حاضرید از من مبلغ مختصری قبول کنید که تا ملاقات بعدی با آن زندگی خود را بطور شرافت مندانه ای اداره نمایید؟)) دختر با ژست امتناع آمیزی گفت : ((¬†به هیچ وجه))
The three spectators seemed quite stupefied. They offered no interference, and the boy and man rolled on the ground together; the former, heedless of the blows that showered upon him, wrenching his hands tighter and tighter in the garments about the murderer‚Äôs breast, and never ceasing to call for help with all his might.
هر سه نفر تماشا چی این صحنه مبهوت مانده بودند، حتی کوچکترین حرکتی هم برای دخالت نکردند و پسرک و¬†جانی با هم بر زمین غلتیدند و پسرک بدون اینکه اعتنایی به باران مشتی که بر سر و کله اش فرود می آمد داشته باشد، دست های خود را محکم در میان جامه هایی که سینه ی جانی را پوشانده بود فرو کرده و مرتب برای استمداد فریاد می کشید
As is evident, in translating from English to Persian structural shifts tend to occur everywhere within the text. However there were some instances of exception in literary forms e.g. in samples 3,4and 5. Unit shifts tended to happen rarely in the translation of this work. And intra-system instances tended to occur in most samples. According to Vinay and Darbelnet, transpositions are classified as optional and obligatory. The same is true about the catford shifts. According to the evidences, structure shifts and intra-system shifts can be classified as obligatory shifts since in the process of translating from English to Persian translator doesn‚Äôt have many structural choices and any alterations lead to a change in the style. Unit and class shifts following Vinay and Darbelnet (2000) can be classified as optional shifts in which the translator has some choices among two or more items. In other words unit shifts and class shifts are determinant of weather a translation is free or literal, covert or overt, semantic or communicative.
In translating from English into Persian one must be aware of the SVO structure of English and change it to SOV in Persian unless you decide to change the style as in sample 3 or follow the SL form as in sample 4 or make the subject implicit in verb as in sample 3. In the case of intra-system shifts one must be aware of both language‚Äôs systems and grammars to apply the shift correctly.
By defining more unit shifts to translation, it moves from literalness toward being free. Thus the translator on the basis of his intention(s) has the option to determine the kind of his translation by choosing among the alternatives such as the followings:
Further research can be performed to investigate the structure shifts in the case of literary translation where stylistic changes tend to make deviations from the normal structure. The same research can also be performed to investigate the structure shifts via the realization of passive structure within the translating process.
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Published - February 2010